There are many similarities between the ways that
O'Brien and Vonnegut's write their stories. I would like to emphasize the most prominent
three; the lack of sequence while trying to narrate and tendency to go in a
circular way of speaking, they both keep their readers question the validity of
their stories, and the fact that none of their stories really had an ending.
The first point, the lack of sequence, is prominent in Vonnegut's writing in
the way that each story seems to have a smaller story within it to explain the
previous story but it never really gets back to that main point. The difference
in this case though is that O'Brien at least would stay in the same
'ballpark" of the idea, but Vonnegut would just completely get off topic
by talking about other people which would then make you question if those characters
were even real. This is also similar to O'Brien because he outright told his
audience that he may make some people up. This is a way that they get their
readers to question the validity of what they are reading. They say all these
stories like they are so definite and true to their lives and then they go back
and contradict what they say by adding little statements, for instance O'Brien
"The truths are contradictory. It can be argued, for instance, that war is
grotesque. But in truth war is also beauty." This is the introduction to
one of paragraphs and he questions himself, and kind of takes what he says and
says it may not be the way he explains, in the first two lines. With their
circular writing method, none of their stories really ended in any known manner
which makes it hard to follow their thought process. All of these similarities
in their style of writing actually all goes back to how they have Post
Traumatic Stress Disorder that both of them most likely suffer from being
involved in war.
Excellent points! I really like your observation about how the authors add little statements on top of stories already told, making the reader question their believability. I think that the addition of new details with each retelling of a story is a very human phenomenon that appears even outside of war. I also like your observation about how Vonnegut often leaves points and anecdotes unfinished after interrupting them with new narratives. I believe this formats the story much like a stream of consciousness narrative. I imagine someone with a lot on his mind but who is unsure of how to articulate his thoughts, which I imagine is a struggle for many veterans.
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